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  2. In this argument the author concludes that the Apogee Company should dose

  down field offices and conduct all its operations from a single, centralized location

  because the company had been more profitable in the past when all its operations were

  in one location. For a couple of reasons, this argument is not very convincing.

  First, the author assumes that centralization would improve profitability by cutting

  costs and streamlining supervision of employees. This assumption is never supported

  with any data or projections. Moreover, the assumption fails to take into account cost

  increases and inefficiency that could result from centralization. For instance, company

  representatives would have to travel to do business in areas formerly served by a field

  office, creating travel costs and loss of critical time. In short, this assumption must be

  supported with a thorough cost-benefit analysis of centralization versus other possible

  cost-cutting and/or profit-enhancing strategies.

  Second, the only reason offered by the author is the claim that Apogee was more

  profitable when it had operated from a single, centralized location. But is centralization

  the only difference relevant to greater past profitability? It is entirely possible that

  management has become lax regarding any number of factors that can affect the bottom

  line such as inferior products, careless product pricing, inefficient production, poor

  employee expense account monitoring, ineffective advertising, sloppy buying policies

  and other wasteful spending. Unless the author can rule out other factors relevant to

  diminishing profits, this argument commits the fallacy of assuming that just because one

  event follows another , the second event has been

  caused by the first.

  In conclusion, this is a weak argument. To strengthen the conclusion that Apogee

  should close field offices and centralize. This author must provide a thorough cost-

  benefit analysis of available alternatives and rule out factors other than decentralization

  that might be affecting current profits negatively.   

  

  2. In this argument the author concludes that the Apogee Company should dose

  down field offices and conduct all its operations from a single, centralized location

  because the company had been more profitable in the past when all its operations were

  in one location. For a couple of reasons, this argument is not very convincing.

  First, the author assumes that centralization would improve profitability by cutting

  costs and streamlining supervision of employees. This assumption is never supported

  with any data or projections. Moreover, the assumption fails to take into account cost

  increases and inefficiency that could result from centralization. For instance, company

  representatives would have to travel to do business in areas formerly served by a field

  office, creating travel costs and loss of critical time. In short, this assumption must be

  supported with a thorough cost-benefit analysis of centralization versus other possible

  cost-cutting and/or profit-enhancing strategies.

  Second, the only reason offered by the author is the claim that Apogee was more

  profitable when it had operated from a single, centralized location. But is centralization

  the only difference relevant to greater past profitability? It is entirely possible that

  management has become lax regarding any number of factors that can affect the bottom

  line such as inferior products, careless product pricing, inefficient production, poor

  employee expense account monitoring, ineffective advertising, sloppy buying policies

  and other wasteful spending. Unless the author can rule out other factors relevant to

  diminishing profits, this argument commits the fallacy of assuming that just because one

  event follows another , the second event has been

  caused by the first.

  In conclusion, this is a weak argument. To strengthen the conclusion that Apogee

  should close field offices and centralize. This author must provide a thorough cost-

  benefit analysis of available alternatives and rule out factors other than decentralization

  that might be affecting current profits negatively.   

  

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