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  69. The companys marketing department recommends discontinuing a deluxe air

  filter and concentrating advertising efforts on an economy filter, which requires

  replacement more often than the deluxe model. This recommendation is based on

  reports showing that sales of economy filters, and company profits, have dropped

  significantly since the company began manufacturing and marketing the deluxe filter six

  months ago. The marketing departments argument is specious in three important

  respects.

  First, the marketing department assumes that if the company discontinues the new

  deluxe air filter, customers will resume buying its economy filter. This assumption may

  not be correct. Customers who prefer the deluxe model may do so because it requires

  replacement less often. Thus, instead of buying the companys economy filters again,

  these customers may just as likely turn to a competitor for a product similar to the

  deluxe model. In this event, the result would be lower profits.

  Secondly, the marketing department fails to recognize alternative strategies that

  might enhance profits more than discontinuing the deluxe filter would. It is possible that

  lowering the price of the economy model, raising the price of the deluxe model, or both,

  may actually maximize profits. A lower-priced economy filter might lure customers

  from competing products and retain current customers. At the same time, buyers of the

  deluxe model may place a premium value on its convenience and may be willing to pay

  an even higher price for the filter.

  Thirdly, the marketing department unfairly assumes that the availability of its

  deluxe filter is the cause of decreasing profits. It is equally possible that other factors,

  such as increased competition or supply prices, or decreased demand for these kinds of

  filters generally, are responsible for the decrease in profits. If so, discontinuing the

  deluxe filter may not serve to maximize, or even enhance, the companys profits.

  In conclusion, the departments argument for discontinuing the deluxe filter is

  weak because the department has not considered the possible adverse consequences of

  doing so, or the alternatives to doing so. Moreover, the department has failed to

  establish a clear causal connection between the availability of the deluxe filter and

  decreasing profits. To strengthen its argument, the department must consider and rule

  out pricing adjustments as a better strategy to maximize profits, and must provide better

  evidence that the deluxe filter is the cause of the decrease in profits.

  

  69. The companys marketing department recommends discontinuing a deluxe air

  filter and concentrating advertising efforts on an economy filter, which requires

  replacement more often than the deluxe model. This recommendation is based on

  reports showing that sales of economy filters, and company profits, have dropped

  significantly since the company began manufacturing and marketing the deluxe filter six

  months ago. The marketing departments argument is specious in three important

  respects.

  First, the marketing department assumes that if the company discontinues the new

  deluxe air filter, customers will resume buying its economy filter. This assumption may

  not be correct. Customers who prefer the deluxe model may do so because it requires

  replacement less often. Thus, instead of buying the companys economy filters again,

  these customers may just as likely turn to a competitor for a product similar to the

  deluxe model. In this event, the result would be lower profits.

  Secondly, the marketing department fails to recognize alternative strategies that

  might enhance profits more than discontinuing the deluxe filter would. It is possible that

  lowering the price of the economy model, raising the price of the deluxe model, or both,

  may actually maximize profits. A lower-priced economy filter might lure customers

  from competing products and retain current customers. At the same time, buyers of the

  deluxe model may place a premium value on its convenience and may be willing to pay

  an even higher price for the filter.

  Thirdly, the marketing department unfairly assumes that the availability of its

  deluxe filter is the cause of decreasing profits. It is equally possible that other factors,

  such as increased competition or supply prices, or decreased demand for these kinds of

  filters generally, are responsible for the decrease in profits. If so, discontinuing the

  deluxe filter may not serve to maximize, or even enhance, the companys profits.

  In conclusion, the departments argument for discontinuing the deluxe filter is

  weak because the department has not considered the possible adverse consequences of

  doing so, or the alternatives to doing so. Moreover, the department has failed to

  establish a clear causal connection between the availability of the deluxe filter and

  decreasing profits. To strengthen its argument, the department must consider and rule

  out pricing adjustments as a better strategy to maximize profits, and must provide better

  evidence that the deluxe filter is the cause of the decrease in profits.

  

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